O-Level作文例文分析

　　O-Level考试中要说比较难一点的那么就是O-Level写作了，O-Level写作是非常考验一个人的写作水平和语法掌握的情况，不知道大家都对O-Level语法了解的怎么样，小编接下来给大家详细介绍一下O-Level作文例文分析！

　　第一段

　　I was ten years old when I experienced my most scary moment. I can remember it extremely well as I have never been that frightened in my life before. I shall now tell you about it…

　　分析：题目要求考生描述“我最恐惧的时刻”，因此其中最重要的关键词1为“我的”，考生需要使用第一人称进行描述。例文的最后一句“I shall now tell you about it…(我现在来告诉你…)”引导读者跟随作者进入话题描述。

　　第二段

　　I was on holiday with my parents and younger brother, Henry, who was seven. We were staying in an apartment in Majorca. One day my parents said that we were going on a boat trip around the island. I was very excited as I love the water and we would be going in a very fast speedboat, just like James Bond!

　　分析：该段对场景进行了铺垫，介绍了与故事相关的人物及角色。同时文章还使用了“明喻”的修辞手法，将自己的经历与詹姆斯邦德相类比。

　　第三段

　　When we reached the jetty the boat was bobbing in the sparkling blue water. Its white side panels and silver trim gleamed in the sunlight. It looked like a very expensive boat. Our driver was called Juan. He gave us a safety talk before we got into the boat and we had to wear brightly coloured life jackets, which made Henry and I look like little round oranges, with arms and legs sticking out. We both felt silly.

　　分析：这个段落的描述非常详细生动，例如jetty, bobbing, gleamed, sparkling等在内的词汇都使用得非常合适，彰显了考生扎实的英文基础，将穿着救生衣的自己和弟弟比做“橘子”，也凸显了作者丰富的想象力。

　　第四段

　　Juan started to reverse the boat away from the jetty and drove it out into the open water. It was a calm day and the sea was very smooth so I wasn’t frightened at all. As the boat went faster and faster, it began to hit the surface of the water with more power. It began to crash into the waves and got more and more bumpy. Dad was holding on to Henry, as he was smaller than me, and I sat in the back, clasping onto my seat as best I could. However, as it got bumpier, and the salty sea spray splashed into my eyes and onto my leather seat, I felt my hands slipping. Suddenly we hit a really big wave and I lurched forwards, towards the edge of the boat. All I could see were the waves and water coming towards me and I really thought I was going to go over the side. My heart pounded in my ribcage as I tried to grab on to something. Luckily, Dad spotted my bright orange lifejacket out of the corner of his eye and grabbed me, pulling me back to safety before I could fall out.

　　分析：本段是全文中最长的段落，但逻辑清晰，清楚描述了故事发生的地点及具体发生的情况。文章还使用了复合句式，断句也恰当合适。用词准确且恰当。

　　第五段

　　I was so pleased to get back to the shore. As I got out of the boat, my legs were shaking like jelly. I will never feel silly about wearing a lifejacket again as it saved my life.

　　分析：结尾段简短到位，且强调了穿戴救生衣的重要性，在讲述自己经历的同时强调了作者从这件事中学到的道理。

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